South Jersey Sam: Horrors of Disney World
In South Jersey Sam's latest review, he reviews a Disney fanfiction that's in dire need of work, as part of a new series on his show called "From the Fans".
Name: Danny da Critic
Date And Time: 2013-04-01 20:42:34Comment:
It's a shame I can't find the actual fanfiction on the site anymore.
Date And Time: 2013-01-20 18:39:07Comment:
Hello sir! I know I have no way of really proving this apart from my word, but I'm the author of The Great Disney Adventure series. I just about had a heart attack when I saw the title of my fanfiction during the beginning of this episode and I am soooo relieved to see that my fic is being used as a positive example. Either way. Thanks so much for the praise and free advertisement!!
Date And Time: 2012-10-23 02:55:26Comment:
Nice job with this review and the song choice at the end was perfect.
Date And Time: 2012-08-21 21:30:49Comment:
Hey; I recently wrote a Redwall fanfiction. (Well, not THAT recently XD) would you be willing to review it?
Date And Time: 2012-07-21 00:05:47Comment:
if you want bad grammer make a commentary on every thing 90s suck on yotube but its a review on some one channel she made a fan fic that was bad that it got commentated on with a reading on it
Name: Lady Dryer
Date And Time: 2012-06-28 01:57:23Comment:
I wrote a few chapters in a fanfic for PotC, but stopped, because I ran out of juice.
Whoever wrote this teen-drama crap is clearly either not a fan of Disney or a complete douchbag. I would've love to go back to Walt Disney World for my SWEET sixteen birthday, if we could have afford it back then.
Lack of creativity, editing and heart. Makes me want to read the Kingdom Keepers, which sounds rather intriguing.
Name: Catherine L.
Date And Time: 2012-03-29 21:48:51Comment:
Oh wow. I may not be the best writer but at least I know HOW to write a story!
If my high school English teachers saw this fanfic they would be scared out of their mind from this crappy fanfic.
And it's not that good of a plot. A girl who is perpetually annoyed with everything Disney just because she's 16.
Name: Nathan Forester
Date And Time: 2012-01-22 03:09:18Comment:
Hi Sam, I loved your little review of this piece, do you think you could review this?
Date And Time: 2011-12-19 08:16:08Comment:
Check out Shychick's fanfictions via Deviantart, her Pinocchio stories (which are actually about Jiminy XD) they're soooo awesome!
Date And Time: 2011-08-31 18:15:20Comment:
at first that sounded like a zombie story at disney (oh please if someone made one tell me) oh and the last bit of the story made me think of this joke "see i told you disney is a bunch of theme park nazis!!!! they serve under the mouse" there were some other puns i thought of too while watching but still great show :)
Date And Time: 2011-08-13 16:24:11Comment:
I got that beat Mr. Sam.
"My Immortal" You have to of heard of it?! A few years back me and 3 friends took on the very, very, VERY difficult challange to ourselves to reading it.
I literally went insane reading this, we were goin to record it and put it on youtube but we had technical issues. But even today I remember laughin manically to how bad this was AS I was reading it!
So if you want a real challenge or feeling like goin insane I dare you to try and read let alone finish it. Like it took me with 3 other people to do!
The actual fanfiction starts on Chapter 2
Date And Time: 2011-07-13 17:19:38Comment:
Read Crowns of the Kingdom, sure the chapters are lenghty but it doesn't matter 'cause I thought it was a good story.
Date And Time: 2011-07-13 17:17:47Comment:
I faced problems like this before without spacing. It's called The Wizard that Went to Port Mystic I think, I didn't read it all though. Read Close Companions The Movie it's very enjoyable and very funny!
Name: Liz B
Date And Time: 2011-07-02 20:05:15Comment:
Want some good fanart? Check out drachearannak's fanart. He used to be on DA, but quit because of trolls. Here are his Sailor Princess pics on PB:
Date And Time: 2011-07-02 17:22:37Comment:
I agree with some of the comments, you should review on the things that Sony-Mae had made. She doesn't take in anyone's advice as it is evident that she has not improve and for everything else that she has done, is still the same.
Date And Time: 2011-06-25 12:13:54Comment:
How 'bout doing a list of worst sidekicks! I wirte fanfics too mostly parodies but I write my own stories too.
Name: The Idiot
Date And Time: 2011-06-24 20:36:18Comment:
Hello South Jersey Sam, The Idiot here I have a request. Could you review Chaotic: The Shadows Of Mellenadark? Just asking
Date And Time: 2011-06-23 17:03:15Comment:
Date And Time: 2011-06-21 19:40:55Comment:
I know Sony-Mae on deviantART since she is one of my friends,also she is kind obsessed with Oswald the lucky rabbit.I am a fan of him to but I won't go and buy everything with his face on it,I only have pieces of Oswald merchandise.They are a plush,The DVD treasure collection and a pin.
Name: Ken Murray
Date And Time: 2011-06-20 22:13:46Comment:
those comments about Sony-Mae are way to harsh, for one thing she is making an effort to take her OCs out of Mary-Sue territory in her Loonatics fanfics. they have flaws but I think they're good. lastly, I think those people are talking about how Sony-Mae USED to be.
Date And Time: 2011-06-20 14:59:45Comment:
I agree with everyone else that you should review Sony-Mae's stuff. She does need to learn that she has to improve, and she also realize that true critics like yourself will be honest, and if it's bad, they will be ruthless and not give a rat's @$$ (censorship lol). She sadly has too high of self-esteem, and believes that everyone in the whole entire world loves her art and is oblivious that people will speak their minds about what they think of her stuff and will not like it.
Her account is on deviantART, and she has a variety of fanart that shows no improvement over the years, along with fanfiction that seems to prove that she hasn't taken any Creative Writing Courses/pay much attention in English class.
Also, m-may I ask of you to review a preview of a Epic Mickey fanfiction I'm planning to release (maybe) on fanfiction.com? It's called "Epic Mickey: Sidestory", and features a fan fiction character called Arnold the Cax. My deviantART account is the same name as the one I have given for this comment, so please give an honest review! :>
Date And Time: 2011-06-20 00:41:01Comment:
@ Mother Knows Best
And don't forget that neither her artwork nor her fanfiction have shown any improvement in years and she ignores any helpful advice given to her.
Sony-Mae also has the strange need to create Mary Sues (most of which have the same generic hairstyle for some reason) who serve no other purpose in her art/fics other than to be paired up with several canon male characters, her most infamous pairing being Bia (her human OC)/ Rev Roadrunner (Loonatics Unleashed)
Name: Mother Knows Best
Date And Time: 2011-06-20 00:13:41Comment:
I recommend taking a glance over a girl's artwork/fanfiction. She goes by the username of "Sony-Mae" (Google is your friend!), an arrogant kiddo who would like to work for Warner Bros. Studio(s) one day.
She obsesses over Oswald the Lucky Rabbit. A little too much, I might add. Her spelling makes my eyes bleed, and she says she's twenty-years-old. (more like a six-year-old, if you ask me :P). Her writing is... just atrocious.
Date And Time: 2011-06-19 16:01:41Comment:
As an unofficial fanfic writer (i.e. not posted on fanfiction.net because frankly, my story ideas suck), I must say great review, Sam! PS, I agree with DJ, you SHOULD review Jeftoon01's Twisted Princess collection on deviantart, it's freaking' AWESOME!!!
Date And Time: 2011-06-19 14:52:34Comment:
I reccomend a Disney fanfic called "Meeting the Others" and its sequel "Meeting the Others Again". They're both about meetings between the Disney Princesses and their love interests.
Date And Time: 2011-06-19 14:35:54Comment:
Hilarious. Even though this is my second time viewing it. R. L. Stine had more thorough chapters than whoever wrote this. They REALLY need work.
Date And Time: 2011-06-19 11:57:01Comment:
And I thought my fan fictions were bad. And yes, I am openly offering for my fan fics to be torn apart.
Date And Time: 2011-06-19 10:50:45Comment:
That Amanda brat sounds a lot like my brother.
Date And Time: 2011-06-19 07:36:15Comment:
Nice job, Sam. Though are you just limited to Fanfics? Because if you aren't, maybe you can take a look on the Twisted Princess Fanart line.
Date And Time: 2011-06-19 03:46:00Comment:
I have to agree! This story was horrible and the sad news is that there are many, many of these types on fan fiction.net and not just in the Disney section. Being a fan fiction writer myself, whenever I see a fan fic like the one you reviewed, I don't even bother to read it, I just click the back button. I really like this new addition to your show and I was wondering if you will review only Disney fan fics? And if not, I have written a fan fic with 27 chapters, still not completed, and if you want to look at it, it's called Minerva & Michelangelo by MaterOfYourFate (my username) and it is in the Animaniacs section. Looking forward to new videos.
Date And Time: 2011-06-19 02:35:36Comment:
Can you do a crossover with fanfic critic?
Name: Curtis Lopez
Date And Time: 2011-06-19 01:46:00Comment:
HEY SOUTH JERSEY SAM!
I wrote a Disney fanfic too. It's called Disney Legends: The Orb that Knows All. my username is Pokemaster93. You should check it out, but I haven't worked on it for a while due to complications, you should check it out and tell me what you think. I'm also a big fan of The Great Disney Adventure too!!